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Symbolic Universal Notation - Our Daily Bread - A01 4

Title:
A Good Man
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Author:
Cindy Hess Kasper
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Passage:
Romans 3:10-18
Bible in a Year:
Numbers 26-27; Mark 8:1-21
Verse:
Salvation is God’s gift. It is not based on anything you have done. Ephesians 2:8
Thought:
We are saved by God’s work
Paragraph 1:
My friend Jerry was a good man. When he died the past said Jerry loved his family. Jerry’s wife trusted him Jerry served his country in the military. Jerry was a good dad and grandfather. Jerry was a great friend. Jerry was a good man.
Paragraph 2:
The pastor said Jerry’s good things do not get him to heaven. The Bible says no one is perfect. The good things Jerry did are not good enough. Jerry knew that when you sin, the cost is death and hell. His final place after death was not from a good life. Jerry knew he needed Jesus. Jesus died in place of Jerry. Jerry knew believing in Jesus was his way to heaven.
Paragraph 3:
Every person needs God to forgive them. Jesus died on the cross for our sins. We cannot be good enough. We need faith in Jesus. Heaven is God’s figt. It is not based on anything we do. His gift is wonderful.
Title: good man
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Passage: read : Romans 3:10-18
Bible in a Year: Numbers 26-27, Mark 8:1-21
Verse: God save you in grace. though faith. this no from you. this gift from God. Ephesians 2:8
Thought: God"s work save us.
Paragraph 1: me friend John good man. John die. pastor mouth John love family. John's wife trust John. John serve country in army. John good dad. John great friend. John good man.
Paragraph 2: John do good thing thing. pastor mouth good things no way to heaven. Bible write no person perfect. John do good thing thing. not good for heaven. John know sin. sin worth death and hell. last place after death . good life no give last place. John know need Jesus. Jesus die for John. John believe Jesus. believe Jesus way to heaven.
Paragraph 3: all people need God's forgiveness. Jesus die on cross for our sin sin. we no good . we need faith in Jesus. heaven God's gift. we no earn gift. God's gift very great.
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