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Papuan Malay - Unlocked Literal Bible - New Testament - 2 Timothy 2:1-26

You therefore, my child, be strengthened in the grace that is in Christ Jesus. 
The things you heard from me among many witnesses, entrust them to faithful people who will be able to teach others also. 
Jadi begitu, anakku kuat sudah dengan anugerah di dalam Kristus Yesus. 
Dan banyak hal yang ko dengar dari sa deng saksi yang banyak itu, beri percaya itu sama orang-orang yang setia, supaya dong dapat mengajar dong yang lain juga. 

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Suffer hardship with me, as a good soldier of Christ Jesus. 
No soldier serves while entangled in the affairs of this life, so that he may please his superior officer. 
Also, if someone competes as an athlete, he is not crowned unless he competes by the rules. 
Mari, tong sama sa dalam penderitaan jadi prajurit Kristus Yesus yang baik. 
Trada satu orang tentara yang kerja sambil sibuk dengan de pu urusan hidup supaya de bisa buat de pu komandan senang. 
Begitu juga dengan atlit , tra akan terima mahkota kalo tra ikut aturan dalam lomba. 
 
 
It is necessary that the hardworking farmer receive his share of the crops first. 
Think about what I am saying, for the Lord will give you understanding in everything. 
Petani dong yang kerja keras akan terima hasil yang pertama, 
Ingat apa yang sa bilang, karena Tuhan akan kasi ko pengertian untuk mengerti semua ini, 
 
 
Remember Jesus Christ, from David's seed, who was raised from the dead. This is according to my gospel message, 
for which I am suffering to the point of being bound with chains as a criminal. But the word of God is not bound. 
Therefore I endure all things for those who are chosen, so that they also may obtain the salvation that is in Christ Jesus, with eternal glory. 
Ingat: Yesus Kristus, keturunan Daud, su bangkit dari kematian. ini su sesuai dengan pesan Injil yang sa percaya. 
Sampe pada titik penderitaan karna diikat rantai seperti kriminal. tapi firman Allah tra diikat deng rantai. 
Jadi sa bertahan untuk orang-orang yang Tuhan pilih, supaya dong dapat keselamatan yang kekal dalam Kristus Yesus, deng kemuliaan yang abadi.. 
 
 
This is a trustworthy saying: "If we have died with him, we will also live with him.  
If we endure, we will also reign with him. If we deny him, he also will deny us.  
if we are unfaithful, he remains faithful, for he cannot deny himself."  
Apa yang sa bilang ini, bisa dipercaya: kalo tong mau mati untuk Dia, torang juga akan hidup bersama deng Dia. 
Apalagi kalo tong bertahan, tong juga akan ditinggikan deng Dia. Klo tong menyangkal Dia, Dia juga akan menyangkal ketong, 
Klo tong tra setia, De tetap setia karena De tra bisa menyangkal diri. 
 
 
Keep reminding them of these things. Warn them before God against quarreling about words; it is of no value, and only ruins those who listen.   
Do your best to present yourself to God as one approved, a worker who has no reason to be ashamed, who accurately teaches the word of truth. 
Selalu kasi ingat dong di hadapan Allah, supaya dong jangan berdebat tentang Firman karena itu akan bikin kacau orang yang dengar, 
Lakukan yang paling baik itu adalah persembahan yang Tuhan terima, jadi pekerja trada alasan untuk dapat kasi malu, yang ajar kebeneran Firman dengan pas. 
 
 
Avoid profane talk, which leads to more and more godlessness. 
Their talk will spread like cancer. Among them are Hymenaeus and Philetus, 
who have gone astray from the truth. They say that the resurrection has already happened, and they destroy the faith of some. 
Hindari omong kosong dan tra bersih yang nanti jadi tra baik. 
Perkataan dong akan menyebar seperti kangker. Diantara dong itu ada Himeneus dan Filetus. 
Dong adalah orang-orang yang sudah tidak benar. dong katakan kebangkitan sudah terjadi, dong putar balik iman dari berapa orang tu. 
 
 
However, the firm foundation of God stands. It has this inscription: "The Lord knows those who are his" and "Everyone who names the name of the Lord must depart from unrighteousness." 
In a wealthy home, there are not only containers of gold and silver. There are also containers of wood and clay. Some of these are for honorable use, and some for dishonorable. 
If someone cleans himself from dishonorable use, he is an honorable container. He is set apart, useful to the Master, and prepared for every good work. 
Biar begitu, Allah pu fondasi kuat tetap berdiri. ada piagam dengan tulisan yang bilang" Tuhan kenal dong Dia pu milik." . dan orang yang percaya Tuhan harus kasi tinggal yang tra benar. 
Dalam rumah kaya bukan saja ada emas dan perak tapi juga ada kotak-kotak kayu sama tanah liat. barang itu di pake untuk hal-hal yang terhormat, dan ada juga untuk hal-hal tra terhormat. 
Jika satu orang kasi bersih de pu diri dari yang tra terhormat, de itu bejana yang terhormat. de dipilih , dipake untuk tuannya, dan de disiapkan untuk semua perbuatan yang baik. 
 
 
Flee youthful lusts. Pursue righteousness, faith, love, and peace with those who call on the Lord out of a clean heart. 
But refuse foolish and ignorant questions. You know that they give birth to arguments. 
Jauhi sudah dari nafsu anak-anak muda, kejar itu kebenaran, iman, kasih, dan damai, sama-sama deng dong yang panggil Tuhan dengan hati yang bersih. 
Tapi tolak sudah pertanyaan-pertanyaan bodok. Kam tahu itu semua nanti jadi sebab baku tengkar. 
 
 
The Lord's servant must not quarrel. Instead he must be gentle toward all, able to teach, and patient. 
He must in meekness educate those who oppose him. God may perhaps give them repentance for the knowledge of the truth. 
They may become sober again and leave the devil's trap, after they have been captured by him for his will. 
Orang yang melayani Tuhan tra boleh bertengkar tapi harus lemah lembut pada semua dong, Dong harus pintar mengajar, sabar 
de kasi ajaran deng lemah lembut sama dong yang melawan dia. mungkin Allah kasi kesempatan untuk dong bertobat pada pengetahuan akan kebenaran. 
mungkin dong sadar kembali dan kasi tinggal jerat iblis setelah selama ini dong ditawan untuk ikut perintahnya. 
 
 

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